導語：奧數(shù)網(wǎng)給同學們匯總了小學六年級英語作文范文及點評，希望同學們的英語學習有所幫助。以下為六年級英語作文范文：

　　A Farewell Party

　　It’s the end of the school year. The students in Class Three have a farewell party. They invite their parents to the party. Many students have performance at the party.

　　Look! Chen Jie is singing songs. Zhang Peng is playing the piano. Sarah is playing the erhu. Mike is doing Chinese Kung fu. What is Miss White doing? She is dancing.

　　Everybody has a lot of fun. But Liu Yun isn’t here. She has a cold. She is at home. The classmates are going to visit her after party. They prepare many gifts fot her. And they will take a picture together.

　　點評：

　　寫法：這篇習作記敘了一個告別晚會。記敘了學年末的告別晚會上大家都表演了什么節(jié)目，以及晚會后大家要去看望劉蕓的故事。

　　時態(tài)：這篇習作可采用三種時態(tài)來寫。由于本單元主要出現(xiàn)的時態(tài)是一般將來時和現(xiàn)在進行時，所以這里我們才用一般現(xiàn)在時，現(xiàn)在進行時和一般將來時來寫。

　　句型：

　　一般現(xiàn)在時：主語+動詞原形+其他。

　　現(xiàn)在進行時：主語+現(xiàn)在分詞+其他。

　　一般將來時：主語+ be going to / will +動詞原形+其他。

　　注意：由于本篇文章中所涉及的時態(tài)比較多，所以要注意一下時態(tài)的變化。學生們都在表演什么節(jié)目可以用現(xiàn)在進行時，將要去做什么，要用將來時。另外還要注意，一般現(xiàn)在時在肯定句中，主語是第三人稱單數(shù)，謂語動詞也要用第三人稱單數(shù)。