導(dǎo)語(yǔ)：奧數(shù)網(wǎng)給同學(xué)們匯總了小學(xué)六年級(jí)英語(yǔ)作文范文及點(diǎn)評(píng)，希望同學(xué)們的英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)有所幫助。以下為六年級(jí)英語(yǔ)作文范文：

　　Li Ying ’S Hobby

　　Li Ying likes English very much. She works hard at it. She reads English every morning. She likes speaking English. She often listens to the radio. She watches TV only on Saturday evening.

　　Does she like dancing? No, she doesn’t. But she likes drawing and singing. Her parents love her. And all the teachers and her friends like her, too. She says her hobbies make her happy.

　　【要領(lǐng)點(diǎn)評(píng)】

　　這一篇寫愛好的文章,小作者的寫作思路很值得我們學(xué)習(xí),他沒有具體寫到劉瑩的某一種愛好,而是從學(xué)習(xí)到課余的多種愛好入手,對(duì)劉瑩的各種愛好進(jìn)行了粗線條地勾畫.從“愛好”這個(gè)角度來(lái)看劉瑩的話，我們會(huì)覺得這個(gè)形象很飽滿。

　　小朋友們寫這種“敘事寫人”作文時(shí)，可以從兩個(gè)角度下手：一是具體地描繪;二是和上面小朋友一樣，粗線條地勾畫，二者各有所長(zhǎng)，另處在行文中使用一些問句，使用一些轉(zhuǎn)述的話，可以使作文更有靈氣，避免了平鋪直敘的缺點(diǎn)。比如上文的“Does she like dancing? No, she doesn’t.”和“she says her hobbies make her happy.”就是十分不錯(cuò)的句子，使讀者眼前為之一亮。