導(dǎo)語：奧數(shù)網(wǎng)給同學(xué)們匯總了小學(xué)英語作文范文及點(diǎn)評(píng)，希望同學(xué)們的英語學(xué)習(xí)有所幫助。以下為范文原文：

　　My grandma always tells me that the sunrise and the sunset in my hometown is very beautiful. But I see them all the time, so I don’t learn to appreciate their charm. One day, when I walked on the country road, I looked at the sky and found the red cloud , a big sun is buring, it is such beautiful. For the first, I see the beauty of sunset.

　　奶奶總是告訴我,家鄉(xiāng)的日出和日落事非常漂亮的。但是我總能看到,所以我不會(huì)欣賞它們的魅力。一天,當(dāng)我走在鄉(xiāng)間小路,我看了看天空,發(fā)現(xiàn)紅色的云,太陽在燃燒,它是如此的美麗。第一次,我看到美麗的日落。