導(dǎo)語：奧數(shù)網(wǎng)給同學(xué)們匯總了小學(xué)英語作文范文及點評，希望同學(xué)們的英語學(xué)習(xí)有所幫助。以下為范文原文：

　　The first time I see the beach, I feel so excited. It is early in the morning, I walk to the beach and want to see the sunrise. there is no end for the sea, the water comes and goes, it sounds loudly. It is a nice beach, especially when the sun comes out, the beach has the golden color, I will never forget the scenery.

　　第一次看到沙灘,我感到很興奮。清晨,我走到海邊,想看日出。大海無邊,海水水來了又走,水聲起來很大。這是一個漂亮的海灘,特別是太陽出來時,沙灘涂上了一層金黃色,我永遠(yuǎn)都不會忘記這樣的風(fēng)景。