導(dǎo)語：奧數(shù)網(wǎng)給同學(xué)們匯總了小學(xué)英語作文范文及點評，希望同學(xué)們的英語學(xué)習(xí)有所幫助。以下為范文原文：

　　I have raised a pet cat for two years, but since last week, the cat doesn’t feel like eating any food, it just lies down the ground and looks weaker. I am so worried about him, I want him to get better soon. So I buy him the delicious food, but it looks the same. I hope seeing the doctor can make him better.

　　我養(yǎng)了一只寵物貓有兩年了,但是自上周以來,這只貓不想吃任何食物,它只是躺地上,看起來虛弱。我很擔(dān)心他,我希望他能早日康復(fù)。所以我給他買了美味的食物,但是它看起來一樣。我希望看醫(yī)生可以使他好得快點。